Copyedits for ICE
I spent the weekend reviewing copyedits for my new book, Ice.
Apparently I, don't, know how to, use commas,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Labels: Copyedits, Ice, Semicolon-Induced Madness
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I spent the weekend reviewing copyedits for my new book, Ice.
Labels: Copyedits, Ice, Semicolon-Induced Madness
posted by Sarah Beth Durst @ 12:49 AM
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I'm a writer of fantasy novels for teens, including DRINK SLAY LOVE, ENCHANTED IVY, ICE, INTO THE WILD, and OUT OF THE WILD. My next book, VESSEL, is about a girl who lives in a harsh desert land and is destined to sacrifice herself so her clan's goddess can inhabit her body... but her goddess never comes. It comes out in September 2012 from Simon & Schuster. I'm very, very, very excited about this.
In a desert land where serpents made of unbreakable glass fly through the sky and wolves made of only sand hunt within storms, Liyana is destined to be a vessel, to sacrifice herself so her clan's goddess can inhabit her body... but her goddess never comes.
Coming in September 2012 from
Simon & Schuster / Margaret K. McElderry Books.
Pre-order now!
"Unique and breathtaking -- Sarah Beth Durst outdoes herself, again!" --
Tamora Pierce, New York Times bestselling author of the Beka Cooper series
Pearl is a sixteen-year-old vampire, fond of blood, allergic to sunlight, and mostly evil... until the night she is stabbed through the heart by a were-unicorn's horn and begins to develop a conscience.
Available now from
Simon & Schuster / Margaret K. McElderry Books.
Read the first chapter.
Order now!
"Combining a sense of humor with the dark appeal of supernatural romance, this book is funny, scary and thought provoking all at once. Even jaded fans of the supernatural will find fun in this one." --
Kirkus Reviews
"Having her way with the conventions of the genre, Durst crafts a fresh, modern, and humorous twist on the vampire novel. Lively characters and a sweet romance are icing on the cake." --
Publishers Weekly
A story about getting into college. You know, taking the campus tour, talking to the gargoyles, flirting with the were-tigers, riding the dragons... While visiting the campus of Princeton University, 16-year-old Lily discovers a secret gate to a magical realm and must race against time to save herself, her world, and any hope she has of college admission.
Available now from
Simon & Schuster / Margaret K. McElderry Books.
Read the first chapter.
Order now!
"Every page of ENCHANTED IVY weaves a delightful, seductive spell. Lily is a true heroine--smart, intrepid, and utterly human. I'd give anything to travel to the world of Sarah Beth Durst's imagination!" --
Jeri Smith-Ready, award-winning author of Shade
A polar bear, true love, and one girl's impossible quest across the frozen North. Would you risk everything for a fairy tale?
Available now from
Simon & Schuster / Margaret K. McElderry Books.
Read the first two chapters.
Order now!
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Andre Norton Award Finalist |
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Boston Authors Club Young Readers Award Finalist |
Julie is Rapunzel's daughter. Really, she is. Long ago, the fairy-tale characters escaped the fairy tale
to live in secret in our world. But now the fairy tale wants its characters back, and it's up to Julie to
save them. Available now from
Penguin Young Readers / Razorbill.
Read the first chapter.
Order now!
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Andre Norton Award Finalist |
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Cybils F/SF Award Finalist |
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Missouri Truman Readers Award Nominee |
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Florida Sunshine State Young Readers Award Nominee |
Join Julie on a magical road trip across America. A flying bathmat, a very drowsy princess, a fire- breathing dragon, and several
thousand magic beanstalks... Julie's world, our world, will never be the same again. A sequel to Into the Wild, available now from
Penguin Young Readers /
Razorbill.
Read the first chapter.
Order now!
"An enchanting romp full of adventure, humor and cleverness!" --
Holly Black, New York Times bestselling author of The Spiderwick Chronicles and Tithe
"An amazing, wild ride with very high stakes, and the fate of humans and fairytale people alike on the shoulders of one determined girl.
This is even better than the first book!" --
Tamora Pierce, New York Times bestselling author of Terrier (Beka Cooper) and The Will of the Empress
"This is one of those rare occasions when the sequel is as good as the first book, if not better. Though, in my estimation, they make two
halves of one story, and what a wonderfully entertaining story it is." -- Charles de Lint, author of
The Blue Girl and Widdershins
"Head-spinning fun! Any book that mixes fire breathing dragons and Elvis Presley is a rare treat." --
Michael Buckley, New York Times bestselling author of The Sisters Grimm series






18 Comments:
Ah commas how you pleague us. :-P
Haha! I teach high school English, and was disheartened that tenth and eleventh graders didn't know how to use commas...but the kids will be happy to know it's not just them!
Commas are mostly a matter of personal preference, anyway.
I've always had a comma addiction, and my critique loved calling me on it. So with my book, I also tossed in a bunch of ellipses and em-dashes...and suddenly it became my style.
We missed you in Boston! Seriously, the entirety of Boskone was a bunch of sad people sitting around the Westin lobby asking each other "Why didn't Sarah come this year?" and then single tears would fall from our eyes.
See you next year? :)
SavyLeartist: Oh, comma, thou art fair cruel.
Beth: I also mixed up "further" and "farther," which is horrifically embarrassing. I am still writhing in shame.
Q: I prefer lots of them!
Jay: That's comforting to hear. I am very fond of ellipses and em-dashes too. Sounds like we have similar styles. I also adore semicolons...
Ryan: I wish I could have been there! Definitely next year.
My English teacher taught my class proper punctuation last year, and now I'm a stickler for commas. :)
Priya: I'm a stickler for proper use of semicolons. ;)
I always use commas instead of periods, because I never really feel like my "idea" is truly finished, so I stretch it out by never putting a period in, just commas, unfortunately this makes reading my sentences(if you can call them that), rather difficult, and then I was introduced to the wonderful word of semi-colons; they aren't commas, but they aren't periods; it's fantastic!
;)
commas, can, be, evil, mostly, when, the, comp, tells, us, to, use, them, when, they, Are, not, needed.
lol, that was fun.
can't wait for ICE( or a number of other books. but ICE comes first.)
Enna Isilee: I think that's the best explanation for semicolon-usage I've ever heard.
Hedgi: Thank, you, so, much!
Ha, that's funny. I probably don't either :)
Congrats on Ice!
Thanks for becoming my friend on GoodReads! I hope you can get back to me. (On GoodReads, I am BookGirl
I accidently posted as anonymous. Sorry :-)
Ooooooooookaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay.
I am sooo excited to read ICE!
Maya: Thanks! Congrats on your poetry!
Katie: Just sent you a message on GoodReads. Thanks for friending me!
Lucas: Or o,k,a,a,a,a,y.
Sarah: I'm so excited to read Demon's Lexicon!
Thanks for the commeNt oN GoodReads! (Still haviNg "N" trouble!!!)
Katie
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